| Show 6 Xactiti c'ta fatal TWO view—" - "oh just for the ride hm?" - in- serted Judy minute" went on Bernice "that I'd sacrifice a year's saving for just scenery? I want romance" "But my dear" pleaded her sister "it is all around you just for the taking That mail clerk is simply gaga about you I can see it in his "Do you think for a They follow—" "A mail clerk!" interrupted Bernice in disgust "Well you wouldn't want him female would you darling ?" asked Judith innocently "And the purser he's that way about you I know the symptoms" "A sailor!" sneered the sister "An officer" corrected Judith ('What's the difference ?" argued her disgusted sister '"They don't make enough money to— But what's the use? I want love love—" "Love?" questioned the older girl "Or love of money? What's money?" "It's everything" answered Bunny "I notice you're marrying a rich man!" with a pignificant look at Judy's left hand "Isn't it gorgeous?" asked the engaged one holding her finger out to better display the ring "But you can't say I'm marrying Ronny for I'd marry Ronny if he his money didn't have a dime I wouldn't care If he were a street cleaner or even a deck hand I—" "Oh yeah?" interrupted the cynic "Yes yeah" defended the sister "But don't give up the ship dear We aren't home yet Lots can happen between now and then There might be gold in them thar hills" ind dicating the peaks that loomed above Sakti But the wasn't in"And don't forget the big terested ball tonight" continued Judy encouragingly "Sitka is giving it just - for us--- " "And all the Eskimoes fishermen deck hands and what have you"' finished Bernice "You are in a bitter mood aren't you dear? Look there's a yacht in the harbor Oh Bunny isn't it too too divine?" She included the entire panorama in her compliment ''Isn't that ' a gorgeous view?" "You've said that before" in"Do you think formed her sister you're history?" "If only Ronny Could be here" ignored the thrust "He'd love all this You know I wish I'd chosen this trip for our honeymoon instead of the islands—" But Bernice hadn't heard her She had withdrawn to her stateroom—to sulk—Judy decided But Judy was wrong The mention of the yacht had fanned the spark of hope in the girl and she decided to resume her hunt for the holy grail "Oh Sial" called Judy some time later "The gang plank's being lowered and— Oh so the butterfly emerges from her cocoon" noting eyes the change of raiment as her sister joined her "Why not?" defended Bernice "One can't dance in a sport suit" "I can" answered Judith button ing the one button of her linen suit "Well come on Lady in defiance Launtal let's be about our search" "Gee this place sort of gets you doesn't it?" sighed Judy: a sigh of contentment They were seated on a bench in Sitka's Lover's lane looking out at the sea through the trees "Yes even! could be happy here" admitted Bunny with a covetous glance toward the yacht "Sure sure" agreed Judy "but for how long?" Bernice ignored that thrust: so a silence followed a silence interrupted lapping of the waves on only by the beach and the singing the near-b- y Even Berof the birds overhead nice seemed to have absorbed some of the peace of her surroundings but not for long "Look the sun's setting!" she exclaimed "Yes" acknowledged her sister 'Isn't it gorgeous?" ' ? i y t ri'''Ii' ' i 4 - - ) ' s :"16 Capas1 ' 7 ro" 0"I0 J )1 401 lte 4 4 we- - o ' ' "' ' II” - ' es80ee11 -- N - I 0 : s - 4' I Ir- - - ‘4441 :‘ 0 - ' ' - : 4 i' : IA l 'f tt - I: t t er ' 4 I ! : t ti - Yetir'""4"""""4--"0- iv' I 't 0:: - i - 661Poo ie l'orf vt ile-- e northern summer suns are dissipators—retire pretty late" "Okeh Bunny" answered Judy reluctantly The dance had already started when they arrived 'Now listen Miss Miners' advised Judith "in your search for gold don't overlook any bets Dance with whoever asks you It might be a diamond in the rough who knows?" "But Fin no- Jeweler I wouldn't know" answered Bernice over a She'd been masculine shoulder caught up by the swirl of a tag dance But surely you'd know a polished - 4 IC-0- at 1 I: : -- a t :1 '' - ' i i ---- - 1 ':' ' t :---- --- '4 ""e' It's yu I --- ' - i ' ! 1 t- '' ' ' - 0 'l - 4:1 ALL GROCERS SELL KRE-ME- L 0 Mt imagine—a generous serving Um-m- caramel pudding with the new improved ' Caramel Flavor KREMEL Dessert! KREMEL That the selected dessert of the Dionne Ouinhl BUTTERSCOTCH LESION PIE MMHG PEPPEHTCHOCOLATE stis'ill It Irt4Lisri-t-1-74-111-ki- I OM ? s ''' :11-‘- - et : ' ' :fri - ' 05- -'' ' ''it '' t -- -liv ' — - - Io 07s:4 ?1 heartbroken one "Ile doesn't know my name" and she burst into tears AA the realization of that fact emote her "That is bad" admitted Judith "but it could be worse at least you can write him and-- -" "Oh Judy! Will you shut up?' can't Bunny almost shrieked "I either because I don't know his—" But Judy had to guess at that as to her stateBunny had run sobbingsea was ever room No storm at worse than the one Judy tried to calm in stateroom number 21 But no ray of hope could she inject through the cloud Not even the oil and salve of calm the tempest flattery could chance of happiness "My only snatched from me" moaned the weeping girl ' "And money" Judy couldn't resist the thrust "I sneered Bunny "Money" wouldn't care if he were poor as poverty Why I wouldn't care if he were a street cleaner or even a decic lf -- - hand" "Where have I heard those words before?" pondered Judy her finger on her cheek "But I tell you what I'll buy you a drink Let's drown your ft 1 l':":47'' :‘'410'17 417 ' ::oved-- 1 4 ''''"1--- k' - au1-t- 1m it was you I saw flying over the yacht And I thought you were a seagull" 011 "Thank your scolded Bunny "—or a buzzard?" "I mean a bluebird" explained the defendant "You look like good luck to me!" "That's better!" complimented his happy partner She was glad she'd hastened to change to this blue outfit It was becoming she admitted and did he say yacht? She'd find out "So that old tub in the harbor belongs to you does it?" "Well no" he admitted Her heart sank "It's father's—" She missed a step So he held her a little tighter That was better They danced on in silence too soon Interrupted by: "How's about a dance?" It was the purser But all Bunny gave him was a haughty nostril "Some one is talking to you" in- - : formed her gallant dutifully "That's my deaf ear" was her significant answer "You're a honey I was seared for a minute" he admitted giving look the purser a as they danced away "If I were to be granted one wish I'd ask for nothing else but this go on forever—" "Well said my noble knight" answered his lady "And why not?" "Ah this is heaven angel" he continued But heaven couldn't be based on lies so Bunny confessed "I lied to I you — I'm from the Alameda didn't fly I—" "I know" laughed her "I knew all the time But - tteq m0 zflifl-t- ' eSrf : 'a i "So maybe that would help" the anguished one "How's about another? This one is on me" offered Bernice after the first drink "Two more" she ordered applying more lipstick through the aid of the bar mirror "Here you a re Miss" informed the bartender and she took her glass with her eyes gued to the mirror A familiar figure loomed in the doorway Bunny's knight But instead of a spear and shield he carried a broom and dust pan A glass crashed to the floor "oh" gasped Bunny "I'm sorry" "that's okeh" consoled the bar" 'tender "Here Harry clean this ups" And the knight was at Bunny's feet— picking up the bits of glass "So Lady Launfal finds the Holy Grail practically underfoot" summarized Judy "I hate you" informed the outraged Bunny "—both!" she included significantly as she ran from the room "Just another shattered romance" soliloquized Judy observing the pile of glass in Harry's dust pan "or conquest" she added as she turried around to order anotherdrink She'd need it she alibied "Okeh - I s:t‘ S1 1 ow conceded r"—:0'006"eer-- 0 ik 04 or 4iC6010) - "So do That old boat is like the fairy' godmother When the hour strikes its time to run Let's start: maybe we Will meet him en route" "Okeh" agreed Bunny grudgingly and they returned to the boat just as the gangplank was being lifted But they made it much to the disgust of many most of whom was the purser "We should have left you By the way Is your deafness acute?" he solicited No answer "Dumb too?' he added another coal of fire But her head (and heart) were asbestos She was too busy searching the shore for her mysterious Romeo "I just something terrible has she wailed "I bet or maybe killed I he was this I can't!" can't leave "But you darling" informed ' her sister boat moved slowly but surely the harbor "Anyway he'll explain He—" "But he interrupted the part of a shortstory The narra- tion prementrfi on this page is but art incident that ia but one part of a rather good short-stor- y which itii writer could have had she thought over the thing composed quite read- ily Her facility in composition clearly shows that she could have an done Another objection to the story as we see it is that there is too much dialogue in fact it is nearly all dialogue Dialogue is one Of the elements used in a story which is most interesting but like every other element used in narration its total use really bores the reader No one dares to set the correct percentage of dialogue that there should be in the story in general One might by trial and study set the proportion for a given story- However we are very sure that for any story there ought never to be more than one-haof the space devoted to dialogue In addition to these two things this story does not ring true It is not convincing We at least cannot convince ourself that there are two girls talking and acting here all we can make our consciousness ac knowledge is that the author is tell ing us that there are two girls and that they are talking with each other and aomewhat with some other people She does not make us see and' live the things she sets before us That is what convincingness is: The so building a story that the reader forgets the printed page as he devours it and really sees and lives the words and deeds set forth on the page There is a feeling in all minds of some insincerity in the writer if he does not lift the consciousness of his readers to this point The probabilities are that in such a story the writer does not himself actually live the story: he makes it So we say this is made-u- p story I 00 lz 1 i ' lt t t -- 1: I - DON'T LtT CONSTIPATION SLOW YOU UP When bowels are sluggish and you feat irritable headachy and verything you do is an effort do as millions do—cheer IFEEN-A-MINtha modern cheering gum laxative Simply chase FELN-A- 0 MINT belors you to to hod—sloop with out biting disturbed—cart morning gantla thorough rolial hatpin' you fool await gain full of your normal pep Try FEEN-A-MIN- T Testes good is haw!? and economical A generous family supply T I FEE11-A-rillilIc- c": se rIf -' knoirllw )"" 1 at lt v ta k r I '")-- 1 e - ''‘'' ' 411' -- E L )o ''' or A t It ii 'i 0 - " r sst' t4 nt3 ---- -) 0 ( fitotr" i C 914 o ''i Aho 4 ' IP itt-"-1 'z 1V41(fr4- - Ivy V ! '1 ' ' 0?li 14( a L Dc) © - ttliall N 1 r111 t : - "i tAt 6 707 'it -- W i initt- - 4 v - 4 toixr-itris- : 4 4 i ixt THIS NElle Incl N "And yours?" asked Bunny "M i n el Harry" he laughed uHarry— But a warning boat whistle inter"The old rupted his information mother hen calling her brood" he smiled "and that means you'll have to be leaving I'll dash out and get a car to take you back It's a long walk" "OhAlon't please" begged Bunny "let's walk—" But he was gone "Hello stranger" greeted Judy 'Oh Judy" beamed her sister "he's marvelous he's divine—" "A preacher huh?" inteerupted Judy "No silly!" continued Bunny a E 7' N dee4(9111 110g ONLY 4o N with the purchase et any medium or are sizo Pepsodent product Bob Hope Tells All in the Dizziest Breeziest Autobiography Ever A Riot from Start to Finish! Written ab America's Number 1 radio and movie sensation hu written a book! And what a book! 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TS4 t t I I 1 :i 1 ti ! 00 :: g:''' v: st ' "Did it?" admitted Bernice "Hi Bunny! How's tricks?" grinned Judy as she whirled by with the purser Bunny just winked in reply "So your name is Bunny" whispered the yachtsman "Cute Miss - gyilw i ! I ' t' :: it :f 10 r i A t1 4 0 't) 0 sic 1 1 t ''' 1 I I I ' - 1 6 ' ( :'t ft what of it?" "You did?" asked Bernice "How?" "I saw you get off the boat" he explained "I was down at the dock when it came in on business for dad And when I saw you I made up my mind right then I'd find you or know the reason why That's why I'm here That gag about Palm Springs was just to get you interested Did it work?" e fi I 1 ilti II 11 '' 'It i4 off vir )4 ' : tied ' t ei father-confess- If J" r -- 1 ' It $p1 I "Sure" agreed Bunny "but it must You know these be getting late kik4w Itt— '1 ::43:21: " J : 010 ' - - ' lit ( r17 ) - ? smooth :ok yOli: t : ' rittamq— t 3 te"k 3 lirloo" ‘ Ina N ) 1 ' thumb-to-the-no- means i tt4-- ' ''': - ing The first objection to it is that it is not in the technical sense of the term a short-storfor it hai no real plot A plot is the outline of a story in which there is set up a great desire in the mind of the reader for the outcome of the situation which is the first part of the plot in which there are obstacles placed In the way of the accomplishment of this desire which the author h a s caused the reader to have with com plications resulting from the con-'bOf these obstacle with t h great desire and also in which the incidents used in developing the con flict between the desire and the obstades are of increasing emotional intensity until they bring about & climax of considerable proportions immediately after which the story closes It will be noticed from the foregoing that a story consist of several Incidents arranged in climactic order and this shows our objection to the mere incident in that it is only sorrow' t - P 's - —1 - : - 1 N Jr 6:— ' -Judy 1110- - t ' would hardly expect from a woman it lacks a good deal of what a true short-stor- y should be Our reason for using it when it is so necessary that we have stories of the greatly desired length of from 3000 to 3500 words long is that it is the best that we have on hand at this writ- one g 'llit ki ) -- ::' r a k 11 1 z v ''''A04' :' ee i ' i o i ' ''' 1 i l't5: i - t 1 1 e i - il'( 1 J! 4 Pf )11: - 4 e ' ' ) IV - t I 1111' lt Ale! 0'''!411'7-A:--- i C 'i' "'Ni : a t d '4'' " :: - '' -- I 6 0 ' ) t 1 NO L"4''--'- V 2 l' ) r 7 wit ''' a' af o- """' - : j Yr '''''''I''"'"P'‘' d001"1' - i te PIti '' ' t' A : : i1::''''' r i - k e I - 1AP 4 kor i rox ) 1 o 4 ' ?OP' - 0 -- t1 k :': yek )): r! ts : li ' ' ' ' 1 - 071 i V11''711-"SiIP :' ' I0 i V I ""M"-:t"7-f- "d v! '' ' N tos4444 b ‘ '' to p k -- Dialogue Mar- This Story ng i1 7 if - ki M Over-Abundan- ce hyper-romant- ''1' -- I I e "'"loott 10414 s - a ' e ' ' Lve4 ti ' - - 0) "- 4 Ii Stories for this page must be over and under 3300 words long Poorly prepared dim manuscript Will not be read Typing is much preferred All manuscripts must have hilly prepaid with return postage and the author's certificate on The Tribunes printed form included with each draft The monthly prize is 110 There Is no prize for the month of AuAn annual prize of SIMI Is gust awarded every September for the best story of the contest year Anynoir is eligible for this contest 'leapt that former winners of the 1100 may not again receive it Stories that are highly propaganic die exceedingly sordid or will not be printed Readers are raged to ask in regard to story-writiquestions will be an-- interest of Items general swerve on this page All others will receive replies as there is time One should not write condemnin g a story instead let him write a is better one and send it in is That offered being a good sport This as a challenge 10 - v 's 1 2000 I Att 4- -4 if i''"Ti:i7'" li r 1 01'z 4 I1 I4 r itiat ' molfr"'"e' - v- '' r — ' )111Qo4i 1:r1 't 1bt ' ' ' le 'r - ' : : fS : ilk' a " sr!)'-s) "4— ' f1-:' ' a ''NNar'' 4100r : t'7 t ' - 04- 1 I144!14ft '''Ai t a Y1 04 'bit!: Notice to Writers And Readers - 4--4 - :4- 'te ft ':: - i - flit'tb to it together with a gentle cynicism hi regard to the ladies which one r""'"N omit I rS'70114' - 0-- pt 44 111try: it i) c I '7' - )fse:) ! 41- s 4- i a re'll40"17)14114APl r s7'''': P:''11 "''' J'' I : gees :' t 'o a' 1:'0' 5?i't ''tc' 4 1 - 1 : 1 4' - ' 1 '" j - -5 - 10- i 4 M IS By Pro leaner L A quivey While this tale has some sparkle - et diVe of won- "Uh-huh- N xg—- ' Isn't it too " "but agreed Judrth where is he?" "He's gone for a car to take me back to the boat" "Oh so he has a car too?" asked Judy with a shade of doubt "A taxi probably" explained Bun"You go on ny not too patiently and I'll meet you on the boat" "No wait" declined her sister he can't get a cab I haven't 'Maybe seen any" "I wish he'd hurry!" exclaimed Bunny tervously ' - - 1:!' 1 —5 t- F 1 ' 1 !ilt:141 - ii g!'- ' 117"11"91111!" r I- ' C ' snow-cappe- would-hemm- i - "My only' chance of happiness snatched front me" moaned the weeping girl 'That's his yacht after you" 1c ifi 0 Lack of Plot derful?' For Bunny's partner significantly was all of that sleek suave smooth in fact pat what she had been searching for Even the inadequate portrait Ahe had of him from over her shoulder told her that If only— "Hello beautiful" interrupted her hope3 or rather justified them for his was a golden voice "Fancy meeting you here I thought I left you safe at Palm Springs In the arms – of another man" "No" countered Bunny "I couldn't bear being away from you so I flew 1I - i one wouldn't you?" whispered Judy ! ' Short 1181t1T° ilreland by Thelma gia GIRLS leaned over the watching the little town Sitka grow larger in the distance The younger girl sighed "'Bored Bunny?" asked the other "Yes" answered his sister frankly "and disgusted" "How come? I think it's marvelous Just look isn't that exquisite?" she asked indicating the view before "Now that's what I call them scenery!" "Scenery! Scenery" repeated Bernice "I'm fed up with scenery I didn't come on this trip for a T 21 '' November 9 1941 Salt guke Zribune Tr' lc Sunday Morning tit i N r N'oril I F4 I itirottli 111'110 0I roe r i 11 iLi t: I CA ( I Ai -- -- s ft I |
