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Show t 8B I Lakeside Review, Wednesday, June 1, 1988 children collaborate on stories Teen-ager- s, 'I. " Then it came time to actually parts until they got to know them Lakeside Review correspondent and could relax. write a story for children. LAYTON It has to be To make it easier, and to get acEventually everyone chose, or about rainbows. They are the ontual input from children, the high was assigned, a partner and the ly thing I can draw, one third school students were assigned to work began. The younger kids grade student told a junior from go to the third grade class and were to tell the high school kids work individually with the young what to write about. Then they Layton High. The high school student gladly children. Some of the high school were to illustrate the story written obliged and wrote a story about students questioned whether it by the older students. rainbows. It was all part of a co- would actually be any easier or The older kids were to write the operative effort to find out how not. story, incorporating all of the to write childrens stories; But, trepidations aside, they dutechniques of good literature, The would-b- e authors were all tifully marched off to meet with traits such as conflict, dialogue, students in Deborah Robbins the grade schoolers. plot, etc., and read it back to the Yo, you. Over here! I want younger child for critique and edEnglish class at Layton High. She e stuis assisted in the class by Suzanne you! barked one iting. The younger of the pair had a with one Cottrell. dent, reputation for the right to ask for plot of characStrongest supporters and best toughness. The older boy quickly ter changes, if desired. critics were third grade students paired up with the young comSome stories were easier to write than others. Doug Hansen of Nancy Mecham at Lincoln Ele- mando. Another girl also quickly chose. had a little problem getting his mentary in Layton. Youre pretty and you dress student to shake loose with ideas. The high school students have I kept asking him, what do you studied literature all year but cute. I pick you, she told a flatd that tered high school coed. want in it, Doug said. He just peeded to learn Most of the kids, however, were kept saying, I dunno know. writing for children is not as easy a little more shy about their partas it sounds, Ms. Robbins said. Yea, thats okay, the student In class, techniques were dis- ners. Some later told Mrs. Mesaid, except I also want it (the cussed and traits of good litera- cham that they were actually a story) to have a dog and an atture for children were studied. little afraid of their older counter- - tack monkey that knows karate. So Doug went to work and came up with a story about a man named John the Kidnapper who puts the hero Mike Smith through the ringers. Mike is eveni tually recused by the dog, after a valiant effort by the attack monkey, and in the end the good guys -win and John the Kidnapper is , k arrested. w His student was pleased and did not require too many changes for the second draft. David Garcia got some very specific cat lines from his young counterpart. He was told to write a story that was imaginative about a construction worker who was eight feet tall, and a seven foot tall woman, set in Hawaii, James House, a student in Nancy Mechams class at Lin- and complete with a spuds type coin Elementary, checks copy for story he helped Layton dog who is eight feet tall. David said his student sulked a High students write. LYNDIA GRAHAM ;& I V I 3 A t vi 1M - k i . ' ( . w Sk, ' A ' ' i f i ' , ; ....: & J') . : : h , vy V a. A: i ' 6, A - y-- ' I1 ' 1 4 first-han- V; S", ' s v I' 'V V,. third-grad- H Z r X & 4' 'f i r. . - liMflfia nnran inm Staff photos by Bruce Bennett reviewed by Adam and John Turner, who Story written by third grader Adam Ramboz was (right) and Layton High School students is visiting from Weber Basin Job Corps. lot. David blamed it on the fact Travis was happy to oblige and student insisted a cub scout and that the kid had missed recess even gave the promise of a re- - den mother be added, for weeks cause he had been fighting but David wrote the story and his student was very . pleased with it. He loved it, David said with a broad smile. Travis Watt also had specific instructions to deal with but his were a little more on the traditional side of childrens literature. His young student wanted a story about forest animals, a peaceful forest with a pond, lots of animal games, and a fire with a great escape. But the young students contnb-th-e uted a lot. One came up with a titie when the older couldnt think of one. Most of them offered great ideas. All of them had fun with the project. changes. After weeks of work the two Tammy Patson got a student classes met one last time and had who loved horses so it was easy a party. The high school students to come up with a story idea. But each contributed some cash for from there the story went on, and cookies and punch. on. The stories were presented and Other stories took a twist, too. the art work the younger children One had to be rewritten from had done was laminated and scratch because the younger stu- placed with the story as a medent just didnt like it. Another mento for the third graders. generated forest within a year so little animals could return to the home they missed. His little student was thrilled with the ending and required no major Syracuse Junior High students get community awards -- SYRACUSE At an awards assembly the following Syracuse Junior High students received special recognition for their - achievements during the school year. Jeff Willis, Dick Egan Seahawk Award; Julie Packham and Jennifer Steele, Kiwanis Club Award; Leonard Szumski, Ricky Tennant and Teresa Hansen, Syracuse Lions. Tawna Palmer, Cyle Cook Memorial Band Award; Angela Bair, Jill Zaugg, Cheryl Packham, lish. Eng- Paula Montgomery, journalism; Tawna Palmer, yearbook; Trent Thompson, Janece Parry, Matthew McBride, Dean Anderson, Algebra; Tawna Palmer, Ge ometry. Travis Smith, Bryan Austad and Bryce Thurgood, Industrial Arts. Tawna Palmer, Debra Reading, Dean Anderson, Jeff Sanders and Michelle Kneedy, Science. Lee Kruppa, Cheryl Packham, Alicia Wilbur, Jonpaul Painter and Janell Broadhead, Keyboarding. , John Wojciechowski, Out- standing Male Athlete; Bettina Willie, Outstanding Female Athlete; Alicia Henderson, Cheerleader of the Year. Michelle Caldwell, French I; Brenda Mathis, French II; and Jennifer Steele, Spanish. Clearfield grads get awards At an CLEARFIELD . awards assembly held at Clear- field High School auditorium on ; :May 25, scholarships and awards were presented to graduating se-- -. niors. Receiving an ROTC scholar-- '. ship is Mark Austad. Brigham Young University -scholarships to: Shanee .'gave ; ; . Beddes, Jimmie Keith Bangere-- i I . ter,Jason Izatt, Michael Johnson ; ; and Tamra Flint. Receiving scholarships from ; Dixie College are: Kelly Egan, Rob !; iHiatt,Trisha Jorgenson, Shane I ; Kirkham,Molly Lorenzen,Todd I ; Suzuki and Tisha Thurgood. ; ; Kyan Bradshaw received a scholarship to Snow College. . Those receiving scholarships to : the ; University of Utah are:Euge-neSmit. ; T -- Child. Recipients of Westminister scholarships are:Charlene vis, Lorie Burnett, Shane Karla h, Steve Bateman, Joe v ; Chang,Scott Larsen and Stacy Span-gehthal;L- Business scholarships to Lanae Willden and Deanna Bergevin. Special scholarships are awarded to Joe Chang by the National Honor Society, NASA and Wes-tingho- from i ; ke Weber State College keith Bangerter, Steve Bateman, Lori Bryson, Shantel Visser.Kelly Beddes, Susie Egan, Shanee James,Deborah Gibbons, Molly 1 Lorenzen,Rob Hiatt, Jason Izatt, Denitt Perez.Michael John- son, Kevin Packham, Bill Spangen-tha- l, . Angie Bennett, Amber !; ders.Brad Smith, Troy Poll.Melanie Markos, Mark ; ! Flin- - Smith,Michele Stevens, Eugene , ; ; . : Smith,Mark Knudsvig, Shirlayne Comeau, Patricia Cearley,Kristen Cragun, Edward Richards, Brady Nelson, Brook Nixon, Allison Wendy .Montgomery, Wright,Heather Walton, Katrina ; ; Larsen, 2nd attendant and Mishelle Grov- Tommy Trujillo received a scholarship from the Davis Area ' are:James Gaskill, Jimmie ; ents, queen;Shanee Beddes, 1st Utah State awarded scholarships to: Mark Knudsvig, Jimmie Keith Bangerter,Joe Chang, Shanee Beddes, Molly Lorenzen,Rob Hiatt, Bill Spangenthal, Tisha Thurgood, Melanie Markos and Mark Adams. Kelly Egan, Mark Flinders,Troy Smith.Matt Child and Paul received scholarships from Ricks College, and Michael Gard- ner received a scholarship from CEU,with a Stevens-Henagscholarship going to Stephanie Lemmons. Those receiving scholarships ; Jr. Miss Scholarships are awarded to Rachelle Clem- er, Miss Spirit. er ; ur Corp. Lee. We-bec- ; Kirk-ma- n, McCulloch, Lance Ritter and Todd Suzuki. Promise McIntosh received a scholarship to Utah Valley, with Joe Chang receiving from Princeton;and Denitt Perez to Eastern New Mexico. An Air. Force Academy scholarship is awarded to Bill ! ! Da- Hansen, Kristie Nelson and Matt Vocation Center;Kristie ternational Institute In- of Hair Design. PTSA scholarships were given to Robert ders, James Gaskill, Mark Knudsvig, Grand Finlinson.Joe Chang, Shanee Beddes, Mark ams, Jimmie Bangerter,Steve AdBa- teman, Chris Bodily, Loni Bryson, Jody Anderson, Brent Criddle, Scott Larsen, Stacy Lee.Molly Lorenzen, Melanie Markos, David McNaughton, Andrew Naud, Kevin Packham, Denitt Perez,and Brad Beazer. Dalayne Hibbert,Jim Johnson, Mark Der-rick.De- ril Aus- tad, Doug Cash, and Tamara Child received departmental award in art; Mark Austad, Jason Izatt, Scott Larsen, Brad Smith, Bill Spangenthal and i MONDAY, f JUNE i i! OPEN Osborne, Brent Larry Hatch,Yearbook;Stephen Ledford Jana and Clark, ROTC;Melanie AT 11:00 A.M. Mar- kos, Foreign Language;Charlen Davis, Gordon Bray and Jamie Bradley, Library Science. Criddle.and Kayla Bingham. Natalie Buck received one from TaScience:Joe Biological co Time. Chang, James Gaskill, and Susan Those receiving business and James;Physical Science:Kristie club awards are:Susan James, Jim Cragun;Business:Maria Gallego Beck Chemistry;Amber Poll and and Deanna Bergevin;Home Mike Tolbert.Community First Bingham, Cathy Wright, Amy Outstanding Athlete;Bracken Lar- Zaugg, Wendy sen and Promise McIntosh, R. C. Cook,Benjamin Duff, and Tracy Athlete;Bill McDermott. Willey Spangenthal Zaugg.National Linda ScholarAth-lete;Bi- ll Spangenthal and Linda Zaugg,National ScholarAthlete Award. From the U. S. Marine Corp. David NcNaughton received the Distinguished Athlete award and Michael Whitehead the Semper Fi Award for Musical Excellence. Bill Spangenthal, Daughters Drama:Jonathan 4 I i i j ne Packham;Marketing and Standard-Examine- r LAGOON DAY ert Osborne;Journal-ism:Melani- Coupon Good June 6, 1988 e Markos. Sterling Scholars were Art:Deril Johnson;Math:Shanee Beddes;Foreign 83 E3 E3EB Elia Language:Melanie Chang;Busi-ness:Mar- g Eld E3E3 Bum ia Gallego;Home '' Hofhine;Drama:Jason Izatt; Davis;Social Stud-ies:Ma- Austad;Music:Kelly Egan;Industrial Arts:Kevin Our Classified Section is full of them. Vt a. rk Larsen. LOOKING FOR A BARGAIN? 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