Show I II I 1 S udy Problems I I I Solved WRITING WHITING S THAT APPEAL PPE n II Hj- Hj Irene Irenc I. I I Francis V. W. P Parker School SchoolA A group of children wrote about vacation Vacation va ya- cation callon experiences hour Henry described an unexpected nl out night Don pictured d some Indian guides whom ho watched packing tuttle duffle into canoes Helen Holen remembered a withered little old woman who peered from her hur door at their noisy picnic part party Lois wrote about a horseback ride at nt ni night ht E cr Every one you ou see sec selected un tn experience that was tas aM vivid in his or 01 11 her min mind Hero is part of Lois' Lois stor story You will find ln J that in iii twelve C places she tells you ou what reached her sense of si sight ht in seven se places what appealed to her hearIn hear hear- In ing She Sue gives you u th time o odor or of the night time the feeling of or the cold collI air on her hor face Tho Jho more senses she could ap appeal ap- ap peal to sh she Knew tho the more success success- fUll fully she could make e her rea reader feel that thai night ri ride rido Jo a as site sho he ha had felt it When han you have ha to write your sour next t 1 1 cy theme themo or story re non ber these two principles that Lois applied First write writ tt something you Kno 1010 and second sec cc- cc on wit ond J aPI appeal to your our readers reader's Loiti 1101 Mory ur Time The col cold J dewy doity grass look looked cd stran strange o in the time taint faint starlight as I crossed the time meadow to the barn lo to saddle addle iii my horse I 1 could hear time Iho sounds of or the tho ni night ht indistinct In Indefinable I could see eo the Iho shadows ant an and both hoth sounds Bounds and arid shadows set my pulse a 1 le The pines lInes stood dark darl arid cold across time the dreary river Tho road oad t In iii silence before bote I mile me As s I T rode mode off Into Inlo t time the he darkness I the he trees on Oil either cither hand hammil Stood blood like great straight giants Ih The star twin t kled rh There re was a sweet smell m of clover r. Away I 1 galloped time the cool night bronze breeze blowing iii my ha hair bait l' l The ihme con constant tant I roar and splash h of the time waterfall canto came 10 to my ear through the time deep silent Ilent night TIme The air nil foil felt crisp tile thu black ron road J gave n nc c back Jack the time solemn th thud UtI of or m my horses horse's hoof hoofs Time Tho absence of ot the time moon gave o I a dreary drEnn fearful look I raced racer with the time wind The cold night nis-hl air whistled past mo me 1 I saw sait tio tho trees standing black against tho time sky ahead ahuad Time The road roa flew fies' underneath m inc mv T I heard limo tho water rush past me lime My f the wooden bridge pon pony galloped over oyer H 1 A flickering candle lo light in a window told me mo somebody had heard me mi Next ext week weel Advice for tor Memory lemon Training Co Copyright 1 1920 O b by JI JH r. H. H Millar a- a |