| Show fan mw 7 anatomy of ono one reel comedy omed y 0 of 1 UNO JUNG 1 11 tit W WW arv to the editor in recent letter I 1 fin vve ny mi reader reade be story of a fraynd of ml mine in joe cooper that not etting getting aloha 0 so o good in regular job and finely bau viall to take counci courses by null mail la 10 other leaea like short alory writt lOg and expert am wt and cartoon itt ht and dc etc and after a rile wile be gt so 0 o BI as be was knocking knock loi out coe clote to 60 thousand hoc tand per annum for lili his pare spare tin ulle lle haji another er field jet yet that joe vent went lo 10 it and that 1 Is writhing writ cing photo plays and treat great big money li Is promised for good once ones be baure god knows they are a rare tarot bird slid ld if they Is 1 some of my 07 r readers beniers that finds gods trouble both ends meet the other and could use A 1 couple thousand a year extra earned la in their pore time why here Is I 1 the field to to into you can jan pick op up most jjr magazine and find a dozen ads of face coco schools that isrul I srul fou IOU to write photo plays or movita j r I 1 have nicknamed them but bow are you go coing coins to know that the lie that runs runa tamm alx ra schools hai has ever ditoto a photo play nod and for all at jou you know you may be paying your to it bit blid d that mn aint t done anything all their life but pluck pimples off of a putting green bo go in order to protect my reader from these kind of vipers I 1 have made it op up in my mind to seail at an i a of my own along these line lines sad dd my it that I 1 have wrote 2 photo play plays and they both bopped like tho aure line and my of tia ito bin hin III be to learn my to write photo play plays opposite to like I 1 wrote the big money in to the game today lays in I 1 reel co come ilja the tw this that Is necessary in to writ clos I 1 reft reel li Is 1 a aty ay title 2 a finny idea 3 plenty of laughs 4 witty gob tub titles As a sample of what 11 so and cr go big the nine MAC school of photo lay Write int tava the following fol lowice of a I 1 reil tru medy iedy As a title tf for this dictum we have choe chose inie finny tribe in itself will knock them for i a eoal goal characters GEORGO WOI a Ashin flab monser comedy lead GERTRUDE hia his wife comedy con iedy lead MUNNIE QUAGMIRE her r 1 soubrette rou brette AL SWAMP a detective detec tiro heavy comedy BABY the baby ju juvenile verille A minister cf of the gospel mottles Wot les ties clients etc Conti continuity nulty scene I lG george coree Is la in his store sorting dili A client comes in to and looks over the stock sub subtitle buo I 1 the customer asks for a flo bounder ander george picks up a fl li and lits the client in t the e eye wit with 14 it knocking him donn doun subtitle sub title 11 1 I guess that oll founder yoe yoo another client cones conies in to the store sub title the customer asks for finnan badale tot tut georce george tells him he only keeps west fish the client falls down doun and tears bis big tr oura scene 2 gertie gertle if to jt it home hoine telling setting un on the lounge and pulling superfluous hairs out ot of baty baby bottles les head tim telephone rines rings agetle goes oes to an wr it IL sub life tite the drong number N daby baby falls off the loonie and slid lands on his bean beall SUI timit oh what a headache scene 3 cgeorge SG ceorge eorge and minnie are spooning ID in the hammock on oil the wot lie ile porch gertie gertle comes on of the hoase house and catches them subtitle sub title caught in the act the hammock harn mock breaks and the lovers pet mt down sua denly on the he floor subtitle it of been a vry tood pod ham bum mock scene 4 gertle goes to stamps swamps detective agency and hires al at swamp to take tip up the cast CASL al puts on bli big and starts out with gertie gertle subtitle sub title the plot sickens bickens sic kens ai they are leaving al a office I 1 door hits bits them in to he the eye end zal knocha them down subtitle sub title thle ile in spin out eph I 1 annegan In scene 5 george and bd minnie are HID in to the juh stoa uldale steps on a eel and falli down subtitle eay says ber ml clipped gedrge tells hor she ought to rubber ones al at end gertie gertle come in the store ind nd surprise prise the loters lovers gorp runs to a gb box 00 sets on a perch george tries to get et doat but falls and tears his brou trou em rs al at tries ties t to pick him up but slips on the I 1 slippery floor loor and tears his ht trousers subtitle sub title al thinks theys more to be b patched op up than the marital inar ital affairs of the bottles scene C they all go to the IN ottle home minnie loses her lateresa iB la terest in george ar and f falls 1 I in 0 love o falth h AL kl they sis decide ed to get married subtitle sub title A al 1 a asks the fair fa 1 r minnie ml anle t to 0 become bt c 0 m e bis his bride she says 0 V al at biamon ui amon a I and him and are married with the as subtitle sub rub title the knot Is to scene athe party to the room where a fish breal fast 0 s i erred served subtitle sub title london Dr ts Is alling down in the midst of tie the lija rity baby daby chokes on a fish bone and croaks subtitle sub title cat rat jelly fish no bones bonte there yon log have tot got yow your traby aby title your funny idea your lour laughable situations and your subtitles further and more the construction st Is perfect yon you might say ay fil fc t I 1 t I 1 P |
