Show GIRLS MOUTHS the box elder voice an unusually copious piquant aej independent lie publican weekly becomes pardonably enraptured about alie mouths of the brigham city eirls it seems eliat some and troubadour bad reported that a Br iabani girl found a diorie boe on the street which aha pinked up anil took home with her to bring her unusually eoon luck he put it under her pillow when she went to bed as she did her faife teeth when elie arose next morning she adjusted the horse shoo to her monab in mistake ae might be expected the yoke editor who least of all would lack the chivalry eliat did not quite die with knight errantry comes to the rescue denouncing noun cing the defame fuir Jim sels and proclaiming their perfections in alio following impassioned bo tar as our observation goes we are prepared to aay that the mouths of the girls aro dodels in size and shape the prettiest and mot mo t attractive looking facial apertures in utah As compared with aba cave the nation editor has to carry around with him there is as vast a difference as between the barted leaves of a rose and of a full grown cabbage so far as we propose critic bisot on the foregoing wo noto first that there is the common fault of quite editors that of redundancy a use of surplus words which break alie force and weaken the beenie in proof of thisbe cite from alie above so fur as our observation gots we are prepared ft tay we suggest that when the voice beets itself up as champion for alie brigham eirls against the ungallant libel put upon their mouths it dont need to appeal to it observation shuh an appeal destroys de troys the poetic power of alie eulogy be heroic why piecemeal willi such a subject say at once and without inema 01 verbal qualification what is due and doubly due the pretty anria of again when the voice baye that the mouths of tho alu ld ft we and shape it weakens the force and beauty of the thought sought to axi conveyed by alio worda in italics uni taij r when you depeal of models vou appeal to poetic imagination the reader supplies the thought of beauty that lies in his mind when you maico it a question of bites and eliades eli apes the reader thinks of so many odd cizes and awkward shapes that the sentence destroys itself in his mind again in the clause the prettiest sweetest most attractive looking face apertures in utah the words aro a bad break poetically I 1 it would be impossible for all the muses together to read any beauty into a girls mouth when you describe it a a aperture an aperture appropriately describes a ral in alie mountain side a fissure in a mine a chasm in tho rock a hole in the wall but the word is as dumb as an oyster when it coraee to tell of beauty alie dentist might think of a mouth as an aperture alien ho beeks to poke in hia tongs and pull out teeth but the art of the beautiful discards these baser uses furthermore in the phrase prettiest sweetest most attractive the last two words most attractive are superfluous the flowers that are sweetest will naturally attract the most and those eliat are prettiest will receive the most admiration the voice pro claims either its own sense of tion or tie own or both when it asseverates concerning alie attractiveness of the brigham girls and in neither case is the aisup ance necessary for both susceptibility and appreciation are taken for granted and in such cases alie voice should speak objectively and with as little self reference as pos elble as is ilio rule for good editor hence to amend the testimonial of alie voice will alio knife eliminating attractiveness ti veness observation and aperture we think it reads over so much more effect ively and poetically to say of the fr bhain girls are prettiest and swiftest in ulab |